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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of world forest and timber in five different nations namely, South Africa, Africa, Asia, Europe and North America.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of world forest and timber in five different nations namely, South Africa, Africa, Asia, Europe and North America.
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It can be clearly seen that
Africa
 and North America both are having the largest ratio of woodlands with 27 % and 25% .In terms of
timber
, North America is having highest percentage accounting for 30% and
Africa
 had the lowest figure for sharing
timber
 (9%). In the other regions, the
forest
 and
timber
 rations are more balanced.
The
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Europe contains 18% of
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the world
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world
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world's
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forest
 and 20% of its
timber
.in terms of world
forest
, Asia has 14% and
least
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the least
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 proportion of
forest
 (14%) and only 18% of
timber
 sharing .south
Africa
 has
marginally
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a marginally
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 slow ratio of
forest
 with 16% and
highest
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the highest
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 percentage of 23% for
timber
.
Overall
, North America and
Africa
 are the major sources of world
forest
due to
 having the largest proportion,
whereas
, Asia has
least
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the least
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 proportion of
forest
 share and
Africa
also
 has less popularity in
timber
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, timber, forest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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