using a computer everyday can have more negative effects than positive effects on young children. do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The Daily usage of computers can affect young people more negatively than positively. I completely agree with
this
statement and this
essay will discuss why exploiting computers can influence kids adversely despite some tiny pleasant effects.
having said that, Parents have always been wary of their kids spending too much on a laptop or pc on a daily basis. they believe that spending time
on these apparatuses every day can seriously affect their physical posture and natural cardiac cycle. moreover
, children spend a tremendous amount of time
playing video games that'll not only eat the bulk of their time
but also
teaches them violence. for instance
, scientists argue that kids, who spend some time
on a computer daily, have been found to deal with insomnia due to the blue light and they also
tend to deal with anger issues. for these ,reasons I believe that the negative effects are so much more than the good ones.
to conclude, this
essay discussed why I totally agree that the unfavourable influences such
as messing with the sleep cycle and lack of temper management can take a more serious toll on children than the good ones like saving the earth and virtual education if exploited every single day.Submitted by atizv555 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite