Is development of robots fruitful or dangerous? Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays, artificial
intelligent
causes arguments between the benefits and the bad. In Replace the word
intelligence
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the advantages like an easy and faster life and fast development, the other side is the disadvantages like replacing manpower and releasing greenhouse gas
.
With regard to the advantages, the light side of robots, one of the main noticeable things Fix the agreement mistake
gases
that
they make tasks much easier. Add a missing verb
is that
In other words
, using artificial intelligence will reduce the mental effort needed, for example
, all calculations and complex formulas are done using computers, which are easier and faster. A Second advantage, is they lead to fast growth, using machines in factories they diminished the time. for instance
, using product lines, when transferring goods from one part to another with no human intersection it uses lesser
time than that needed using hands. So, as it is obvious robots help facilitate and accelerate the pace of work.
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On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages, which represent the decrease in manpower needed. Using machines lead
to a notable decrease in men needed for work, and machines Wrong verb form
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come
to replace many positions occupied by people in the past. To illustrate, the population is growing, and Wrong verb form
came
due to
the recent work growth, a lot of people become unemployed. Another disadvantage is the pollution caused by their construction. Unfortunately, according to
some recent studies, this
is one of the activities that most releases harmful gases into the atmosphere, which is contributing directly to the greenhouse effect
In conclusion, robots are a fact in the present day, they are helpful on the side of fast and easy development. However
, they are leading to a decrease in the per cent
of employment and releasing greenhouse Correct your spelling
percentage
gas
.Fix the agreement mistake
gases
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task response
The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of the development of robots, but the points made are not fully developed or supported with specific examples. More elaboration and specific examples are needed to strengthen the response.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present but lack depth and focus. The essay lacks a clear logical structure and organization, making it difficult to follow the flow of ideas. A more coherent and cohesive structure is required to strengthen the essay.