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A magazine wants to include contributors from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about your article, ’The
book
 that influenced me
most’
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, to inform you about a
book
 which has had a great effect on me. It is called Journey To The Center Of Earth which is written by Jules Verne,
one
 of the most famous writers in the world. The
book
 genre is science fiction and explains how people made a trip to the heart of
earth
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. The type of
this
book
 is science fiction because when the writer was writing, no
one
 had any information about the earth's core. I like the story because it shows me how I can imagine and illustrate things in my mind, even though I do not have much information
about
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.
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, when I was
child
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, I decided to create an elevator and I used a basket and string to create it. I did not have enough information, but I could create a childish
one
. I think
this
book
 could attract many people due to its story. I have read it several times since I got it as my birthday gift and I could say I had new, fresh, and
adventure
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all
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 times.
Moreover
, the
book
’s writer is the best
one
 and their books are always top selling ones. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Amir Akhavan
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