You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to point out some incorrect data you have published in the latest article in your magazine about
Isfahan
.
Firstly
it is crucially important to let you know that
Isfahan
is not the capital of Iran
also
it is not the most crowded and polluted
city
in Iran
on the contrary
,
Isfahan
is an ancient
city
with so many places to visit and it is peaceful and calm and the weather is not polluted at all. The reason I am writing to you about our town is that
Isfahan
is a tourist place and there are so many tourist traps and there are so many tourists visiting our
city
every year. The wrong info provided in your article will negatively affect our tourism rate
in addition
to its income for the
city
accordingly
. I highly suggest you please publish the correct information about our
city
next
month and mention previously provided information was incorrect indeed. Yours faithfully, Fateme Banihashem
Submitted by fa.banihashem on

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