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advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children

#video #games #children
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There are different kinds of
video
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games
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 for all ages.
Video
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games
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 have many fans
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in
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children
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 around the world. Nowadays, every child has at least
one
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 electronic device like
mobile
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a mobile
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 phone or tablet. So, they often have a number of
video
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games
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 on their devices. playing whit
video
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games
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 for them have both advantages and disadvantages. In
this
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 paper, I will discuss them. There are some advantages
for
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 playing
video
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games
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 for
children
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 in
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 paragraph.
Firstly
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, the
children
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 can learn many
things
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 from them. as I said before, there are many types of
video
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games
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. some types of them are educational.
for example
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, it's about a
second
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 language, so the
children
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's information about it increases by playing
this
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video
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 game. they learn educational
things
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 in
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 way better than other methods.
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,
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of
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brain
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 is another advantage. some types of
video
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games
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 are
brain
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teaser
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.
Children
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 should think to be able to do their steps.
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, their
brain
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 has to process many
things
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.
This
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 work leads to
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 of the
brain
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. Because of the many attractions of
video
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games
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,
Children
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 usually play them for many hours. So, there are many drawbacks of them for
children
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. I write two of them. The
first
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one
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 is damage to the eyes. As we know
video
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games
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 play on digital screens. Digital screens have
blue
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 light.
this
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 light gradually damages
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the eyes especially when we stare at it for many hours. The
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one
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 is increasing the immobility of
children
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.
The
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video
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games
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 are addictive. When the
children
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 start to play, it's hard to stop them. They spend a lot of time
to
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playing. They are motionless during the game. Immobility is very bad for them because it causes many losses
that
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one
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 of the most important of them is obesity. In summary,
the
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video
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games
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 become important amusements for
children
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. they have benefits and disadvantages. the benefits of them are learning educational
things
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 and
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 of
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brain
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the brain
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. The disadvantages of them are
harming
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 to
eyes
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the eyes
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 and
the
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an
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 increase in
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immobility.
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