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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

In
this
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 contemporary era,
people
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 are tempted toward their health and some individuals think that it is the
government
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's responsibility to control health
problems
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.
However
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,some other
people
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 that all
citizens
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 are responsible for their health situation. In
this
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 essay, I would explain both the points deeply and
also
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 in the end give my opinion on
this
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 matter. On the one hand, the
government
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 should be opened some well-develop hospitals in some rural areas so that
citizens
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 of
privilege
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 areas easily get medicine and other facilities.
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, all
citizens
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 have the right to get fast and steady recovery from their
problems
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 so the
government
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 should involve that type of technology and doctors who worked fast so
people
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 recover from their issues.
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, many parts of the world are not developed so their individuals suffer a lot from many
problems
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 and sometimes they
also
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 they go outside the country to get medicine and other services.
on the other hand
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 , it is
also
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 all
citizen's
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 responsibility to gain knowledge about all medicine
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 they should do some exercise to overcome obesity and heart
problems
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.
for example
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 , earlier many
people
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 worked as labour
also
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 they did some sports
activities
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 so they keep their body fit.
In addition
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, many individuals take part in many extra curriculum
activities
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such
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 as yoga , running, brisk walking, reading and many more so they divert themself to other
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. In conclusion, in my opinion , both are
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similarly
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 and responsible for their help because not the
government
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 do all developments but
also
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 their
citizens
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 do some
activities
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 for helping and prompting the rules.

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