The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about the

garbage

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waste

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management system is not functioning properly in our

community

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and causing an issue for people in the

community

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. I am residing in Al Nadha, Dubai. In our

community

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, there are around 500 families residing and most of the people are working in corporate organizations. Usually, the

garbage

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management service collects the

waste

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materials in our

community

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weekly. Since

last

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week, there was no service to collect

garbage

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. Because of

this

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, children’s play areas are dumped with

waste

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materials and a filthy smell is coming out of the

garbage

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This

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would lead to serious health illnesses for people in society. There are few senior citizens who are already infected by

this

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and it is causing massive air pollution. I request you to look into

this

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issue as soon as possible and check with the

concern

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department, why

waste

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materials are not collected from

last

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week in our

community

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and send a team immediately to clean the

garbage

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Jack

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection system
not working properly
bins
designated collection days
overflowing with rubbish
collection trucks
efficiency
reliability
problems
unpleasant odours
attracting pests
flies
rats
unwanted pests
accumulation of rubbish
unsightly
unhygienic environment
uncollected waste
inconvenience
storing garbage
health hazards
immediate attention
local council
prompt action
properly maintained
staffed adequately
waste management system
regular inspections
functioning effectively
establish a complaint mechanism
waste segregation
proper waste disposal
public awareness campaigns
waste management experts
sustainable solutions

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