The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the
garbage
waste
management system is not functioning properly in our community
and causing an issue for people in the community
.
I am residing in Al Nadha, Dubai. In our community
, there are around 500 families residing and most of the people are working in corporate organizations. Usually, the garbage
management service collects the waste
materials in our community
weekly. Since last
week, there was no service to collect garbage
.
Because of this
, children’s play areas are dumped with waste
materials and a filthy smell is coming out of the garbage
. This
would lead to serious health illnesses for people in society. There are few senior citizens who are already infected by this
and it is causing massive air pollution.
I request you to look into this
issue as soon as possible and check with the concern
department, why Change the verb form
concerned
waste
materials are not collected from last
week in our community
and send a team immediately to clean the garbage
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite