You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Respected Sir, I am writing

this

letter to seek more details on the development projects planned for Maiden Society. I came to know from local media that the construction of a shopping centre by a private builder is scheduled to start

this

December. I read an article in the local leading newspaper about it. The editor compared the previous malls built by the ABC company and the detrimental impacts they are causing to the environment. I was shocked to read the details.

According to

the article, the association did not even bother to work towards basic eco-friendly techniques. Perhaps, the current green area of Central Park is allowed to the builder which in itself made me furious about the project. I would appreciate obtaining any additional information concerning

this

project, especially the city's government position in relation to its involved costs,

besides

the situation of local parks in the city.

In addition

, I might

also

be aware of

what's

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the

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apply

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plan we might expect so that household residents not be affected by continual noise when

this

place is finished.I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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