In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that lots of people in the world are hungry though the development in agriculture

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fast. There are a variety of reasons for

this

, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.

To begin

with, it seems to me that there

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main reasons that cause

this

terrible phenomenon.

Firstly

, the primary factor is that our world population is

also

increasing sharply.

Secondly

, our assignment of food

is extremely unbalance

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. The rich countries are becoming richer while the poor countries are becoming poorer.

Finally

, our environment is

also

surface from destruction, especially

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soil degradation.

However

, I do not believe that we are now in a situation

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this

problem cannot be solved.

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controlling

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the growth of

population

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, balancing the food distribution and recovering our environment, we

also

must

to

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continue making progress in agriculture,

such

as cultivation without soil and improvement

in

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seeds.

Furthermore

, everyone in our world must

to

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save food. In conclusion, our

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will continue to face the hunger problem unless we take effective measures,

such

as controlling the population and developing the technology, to solve it.