Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that

sports

competition causes stress in the youth

thus

they must not be allowed to take

part

in

sports

matches. In my opinion, there are some reasons why I disagree with

this

idea. Namely, it is a good way to release excitement positively, young people need the

amount

of competition.

However

, some individuals have a different point of view that will be discussed in the following essay. Every year many

sports

events are held all over the world. I believe it has some benefits for adolescents.

Initially

, they are full of energy and need a suitable place for showing it and

sports

matches because of the health benefits that have for their bodies and minds

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a good place , if younger people do not release their energies in these types of physical activities , they would take

part

in some illegal works .

Additionally

, a medium

amount

of competition is useful for the youth because it makes them motivated to try harder for their goals

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For

for instance

when a young individual watches a soccer match, they become persuaded to take

part

in some physical activities .

On the other hand

, it is believed that these kinds of matches have some drawbacks ,especially for teenagers,

firstly

because the

amount

of excitement in

sports

matches is high and

thus

has bad effects on their minds,

for example

, some soccer lovers because of the high

amount

of stress in plays hurt themself or destroy public properties .

secondly

, these competitions usually are addictive and teenagers are likely to spend too much time on them . In conclusion, the benefits of

sports

matches are more than their drawbacks if individuals can control the

amount

of taking

part

in them .