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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Every year some
languages
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 are became out of use . There is a point of view that says it is better because life will be easier. In my opinion, there are some reasons why I disagree with
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 idea. Namely, less diversity in cultures, and
part
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 of
history
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 will die.
However
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, some
people
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 have another point of view that will be discussed in the following essay. In some countries, there are many
languages
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 that I believe it has plenty of positive aspects.
Initially
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,
language
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 is
part
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 of the countries'
history
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 and for a lot of years some individuals use
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language
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thus
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 when a
language
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 dies out , some
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 of
people
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's
history
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 will be destroyed .
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, in Iran
people
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 speak Farsi for about 2500 years if Farsi died out , all of Iranian
history
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 would become destroyed.
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, tongs are
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 of
people
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's cultures
as a result
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 variety in
language
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 helps cultural diversity ,
therefore
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 it attracts the attention of many tourists, and it can make income for countries' economic.
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, some individuals believe it has some drawbacks.
Firstly
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, when in the country there are many
languages
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 , the unit between ones will be difficult. Especially in the workplace.
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, it is better for all of the country members to speak one
language
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.
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, in Iran, there are 10 types of
languages
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 and each speaker of these
languages
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 thinks they are better than other speakers.
Secondly
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, protection of one
language
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 that has fewer users is hard and needs a high budget,
as a result
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, it will become distinct after a long run. In conclusion, despite some negative aspects that diversity in
languages
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 has , its benefits are more and governments should place powerful laws and budget for it .

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Monolithic global culture
  • Language extinction
  • Bilingualism
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Cultural erosion
  • Global communication
  • Identity and community
  • Problem-solving
  • Language preservation
  • Heritage languages
  • Multilingualism
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