You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: -Give details of your stay -What were the high & low points of the hotel -What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to give you some feedback regarding my stay experience in your hotel

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week from July 21st till 23rd. I would like to share some points related to services.

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with, the warm welcome I received was commendable. Moving on to the amenities the room offered was beyond expectations. It was well maintained hygienically with a wonderful hill view.

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, I must mention the variety of delicious food offered.

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, there are some low points which I observed

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as the swimming pool area having no changing room facility.

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, the major downside is the unavailability of pick and drop services considering the far distance from the transport connectivity. In view of the above, I would like to suggest that it would be great if you can look into the changing area near the pool facility , and start pickup and drop services to airports and stations which will be very convenient for the guest as well as help your property economically. I am looking forward to visiting

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beautiful property in near future again. Yours faithfully, Komal Handa

Submitted by komalhanda1990 on Thu Aug 11 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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