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Band 6

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir Hello, my name’s Oscar. I’m a marketing student. My homework’s deadline is in
last
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 week but I still need
sometime
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some time
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 to finish it. So, I
hope
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 I can have more time to do it. I can’t do my project
in
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last
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 week which is because there are some problems is my home. My mother needs to stay in hospital for one
months
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month
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.
Therefore
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, I need to take care of my little brother and sister
to
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cook for them and bring them to go to school. I
hope
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 that I can hand it
later
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in later
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 to get more time to do it. You can see that I have never
miss
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missed
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 any
assignment’s
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assignment
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 deadlines in your course’s records.
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, I
hope
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 I can
late
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be late
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 to do the project
of
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apply
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one week because I am so behind with my work. I
hope
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 you will take my situation and allow me to do it. Best regards Oscar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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