Many people argue that museums and art galleries should present the nations art as opposed to art works from other countries. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

There is a certain school of thought who have the notion that

Museum

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and

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galleries

ought to show the

countries

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art

in place of

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artworks

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art works

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artworks

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from other nations.

This

essay shall strongly endorse

this

statement as it will preserve our

culture

and help to generate income

to

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the

nation

.

Afterwards

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a meaningful conclusion shall be made.

Firstly

,

preservation

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the preservation

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of

culture

is one of the enormous reasons people claim the

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museums

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and

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artworks

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art works

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artworks

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of the

nation

should be showcased.

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is because

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the younger generation

are not preview

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to

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most of the history of their country.

Therefore

when they visit these centres, they get to learn and understand how certain things came into being.

For example

,

in

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the recent national tour to museums and

arts

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galleries

organised by the national council for schools in the Greater Accra to the Kumasi cultural centre revealed that

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some students had not seen the golden stool which symbolises the power of the Asante kingdom and

were

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told the history behind it. They

also

had the opportunity to see some of the Old guns used in the olden days as well as some smocks worn by chiefs in the

pasts

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past

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.

Thus

displaying our arts will go a long way to educate the

next

generation to understand how

somethings

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some things

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came to existence and

this

will preserve our

culture

.

Besides

cultural preservation,

generation

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the generation

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of income

as

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another factor worth considering. A key factor to

this

is that, other people who have heard of the

nations

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famous arts and historical items in the

Museum

will be compelled to move from their country to see

this beautiful

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this beautiful gallery

these beautiful galleries

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galleries

and as

such

provide the country with income.

This

will help the

nation

to develop and improve the economy.

For instance

, in an exclusive interview with the trade minister, he stated that about 1 billion dollars

is

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generated from our five museums and

art

galleries

.

Thus

showcasing our

museum

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museums

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and

art

galleries

will help the

nation

with funds which can be used in

other sector

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another sector

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where needed. In conclusion, museums and

art

centres have a role to play in preserving our

culture

and providing funds for the

nation

. I can say without any reservations that they should have a local and not a foreign one which will not benefit the people.