Some people believe that mobile phone converstions should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is important to consider how much time we spend on mobile phones daily, nowadays. While some people suggest that accepting phone calls be banned completely in crowded conventions, others suggest that
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hand, individuals, who think that there should be a ban on talking on a cellular device in public places, might say it because of discomfort to others. The reason for Linking Words
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is that speaking on a phone in public conventions can stifle both the personal and the emotional experiences of folks who plan to live in the moment. To illustrate Linking Words
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point, a person and his family might not able to enjoy their meals at a restaurant if they are bogged down by a person speaking continuously on the phone, ruining their quality time Linking Words
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is an invasion of the rights of individuals and impractical. It is because of the fact that mobile phones have become an essential and integral part of our lives and many of us often operate using cellular devices to perform a multitude of tasks. To illustrate Linking Words
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In contrast
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would face a lot of criticism from the public in general.
In conclusion, while the use of mobile devices in crowded places can be troublesome for a few, these devices have become a critical aspect of our lives and many would certainly refrain from not using them in social places, Linking Words
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as bars, pubs, and museums to name a few.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite