some children spend hour every day on their smartphones. why this the case? do you think this is the positive or negative development.

Nowadays, the world is going through a digital trend. Kids are using smartphones and spending
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of time on them.
However
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this
has impacted
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health and personal growth. So, today we going to discuss both pros and cons of using digital gadgets in
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life. On the one hand, in the digital world, People are using
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of electronic machines and mobile, which is good to make human life easy.
Moreover
, the same things are followed by our offspring because they
also
try to learn and watch the same video on phone to spend their time.
For example
, Schools and colleges are started online courses and practicals over zoom or team apps to reach every student. more, Meantime
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the corona period, almost everyone was closed for everything due to
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not being able to attend school and not being able to take education, on that period students used
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of phones.
On the other hand
, Students or
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got the liberty on using phones, so their parents do not know how their
children
are using phones. Some
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of time on social media apps and doing chat with their friends as well as spending on unwanted apps.
For Instance
, by making a video of their own and uploading them on Instagram or tick talk along with watching porn movies owing to that
children
are not getting success and divert in the same way.
Furthermore
, more use of smartphones has there a downtrend in his career for a longer period. To Conclude, more use of smartphones there is always negative and positive effects on
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life, so parent's focus is very matched important here as I think.
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