In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel aborad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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industry is booming in all parts of the world for the past few years. It is believed that in the coming years' travellers will rather choose to spend their holiday in their own country or visit foreign

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. According to ,me few

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will tend to

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outside their

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, on the other hand, some masses will visit their own

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with ,visiting foreign nations is getting costly nowadays, though

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who are willing to

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outside will definitely visit. Attractions outside the home country are getting more and more developing. According to a report by New York Times, in the year ,2015 the most visited place in the world was Times Square, New York ,

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it showed that most of the visitors were outside of the United States.Another example states that the highest number of

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who visited every country were from China.

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data shows that

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from all over the world will flock to a different nation.

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, due to increasing population and rising costs of fuel , travelling has become much costlier. Due to the pandemic travellers have become more aware and more conscious in terms of safety, health as well as the cost of staying outside.The major reason that comes into my mind is

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crime as it has become a global issue.

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, tourists in France are facing multiple problems while exploring the streets as they face issues of pocket cutters as well as stabbing. To conclude

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, I completely disagree with

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statement. Despite the

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tourists face while travelling outside the

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more and more visitors tend to

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outside in upcoming years.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel aborad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Writing Task 2 In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reason for this ? How can people research this ?

Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the govrnment's reseponsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that importing movies and TV programmes from other countries is better for country . Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Do you agree or disagree?