Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both view and give ur opinion
Some say that
,
the ideal way to acquire a better career is to finish tertiary Remove the comma
apply
education
while others argue that, having experiences and soft skills is most important. Use synonyms
This
essay shall endorse the former statement but the two divergent views shall Linking Words
be outline
after which a meaningful conclusion shall be drawn.
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be outlined
one
hand, attainment of Use synonyms
certain
position is Add an article
a certain
one
of the enormous benefits finishing tertiary institution bestow on individuals. Use synonyms
This
is because, to be employed Linking Words
into
some institution and rise to a particular level, there is the need to have a tertiary Change preposition
in
education
certificate Use synonyms
hence
people strive to finish the course. Linking Words
Furthermore
, improved knowledge contributes to securing Linking Words
a
better work. Correct article usage
apply
One
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do
not remain the same after tertiary Change the verb form
does
education
. The knowledge that has been added on sets the person aside for certain works which can solely be done by the person with that qualifications. Use synonyms
For example
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,
it is only Remove the comma
apply
personals
with Replace the word
personnel
computer
science background that could work on the new excel sheet and so they are needed for immediate employment since it is difficult for those on the Add an article
a computer
job
trained workers. Use synonyms
Additionally
, when Linking Words
one
Use synonyms
complete
higher Change the verb form
completes
education
, it will go a long way to help them have Use synonyms
a better
Correct the article-noun agreement
better job opportunities
a better job opportunity
job
opportunities.
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On the other hand
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better
understanding of Add an article
a better
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the concept
a concept
concept
is Fix the agreement mistake
concepts
one
of the many reasons others claim experience and skills are paramount. A key factor to Use synonyms
this
is that, since people have been doing a particular Linking Words
job
for a period of time, they understand and can explain Use synonyms
reasons
behind what they do. Even though experience and soft skill Correct article usage
the reasons
is
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are
essentials
, Fix the agreement mistake
essential
that
not Correct word choice
apply
with standing
, Correct your spelling
withstanding
it
can not help individuals to secure a better career because the world is changing and Correct pronoun usage
they
certificate
is much Correct article usage
a certificate
needed
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more needed
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then
anything. Replace the word
than
For instance
, Linking Words
Mr.
Amoah could not attain the head of finance position after working for 25years as he does not have a university certificate.
In conclusion, after examining the two opposing views, it is felt thatChange the punctuation
Mr
,
Remove the comma
apply
one
Use synonyms
need
to complete a university Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
education
to obtain a better Use synonyms
job
rather than relying on experience. I will Use synonyms
therefore
recommend that individuals should work towards it no matter the cost.Linking Words
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