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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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In
this
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 date and age, an increasing number of
people
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 have a tendency of selecting convenient
food
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 from
restaurants
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 rather than cooking at their homes. The main reasons for
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 a tendency may be cheap prices in some
restaurants
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 and
people
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's desire to save their
time
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 from cooking. Even though fast
food
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 has some obvious advantages, there are
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 some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the one hand, one benefit of
people
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 selecting prepared
food
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 is that they can save
time
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.
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, cooking
food
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 at home requires a considerable amount of
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,
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, the cleaning process after cooking may take even more
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 and resources than cooking itself.
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, cooking a meal takes a mixed variety of steps from buying ingredients to taking the
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 to cook, and afterwards, you need to clean.
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, for someone who is rushed by
time
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 and needs something fast and economical, ordering
food
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 from home is a huge advantage.
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, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. One weakness is that prepared
food
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 does not have the information about the ingredients used in the meals. It means we definitely do not know how many calories are absorbed in our bodies. In the long run, we may face serious diseases
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 as overweight, obesity, or diabetes. Another reason is the bad quality of prepared
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.
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, some
restaurants
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 may use poor-quality products or chemicals for boosting taste and preservatives, which may have a negative effect on the customer's health in the long run. In conclusion, ordering
food
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 from
restaurants
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 may be a tempting choice for
people
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 who have no
time
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 for cooking at home, but
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 approach would emerge
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 in terms of health and diseases
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