Some people think certain prisoner should be made unpaid work instead of being put behind bar .. discus it with your own opinion.

some groups of

people

believe, that

people

who are convicted by court should work for the

community

instead

of being in the prison. they think the government should try to make them productive for the

country

and

community

.

i

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totally believe every

country

should prepare themselves to use

prisoners

to work as

an unpaid workers

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unpaid workers

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. in

this

essay

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i

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going to analyse

this

argument and its advantages and disadvantages. The

first

reason is that it can be a good way to save money for the

country

. and

also

, the government does not have to pay for some jobs if

prisoners

do that. so, authority not only does not pay money for looking after criminals but

also

,

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apply

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do not pay

to

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people

who do

community

services.

for instance

, if convicted persons help old

people

to do their daily tasks, there will be

profit

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for both sides.

However

, relying on

people

who at least once committed

crime

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can be very dangerous for

community

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the community

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. giving a little freedom to

these society

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this society

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can have a bad effect and

subsequently

regret. So,

i

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think leadership should try

specific

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the specific

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case

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to

counting

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count

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on them.

for example

, they should never give permission to a murderer to work as

unpaid

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an unpaid

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worker. whereas, in some

case

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cases

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which

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where

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the crime

have

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committed small, it is ok to give

the

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apply

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permission to them. to sum up, the whole world should prepare to give

this

chance to

prisoners

but not all the

prisoners

just

who

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do not

committed

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commit

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a big crime. if

this

happen

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,

country

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the country

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will save

large

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amount of money and they can spend on facilities and improvements.