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Nowadays more and more teenagers take a gap year before entering university. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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​Before attending
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instution
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institution
, most
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the
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youths take a gap year
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these days. I assume that the benefits of
this
 trend are more than the drawbacks. Beginning with the fact that, they have enough
time
 to prepare smartly not to be strange with the aspects of
institution
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.
For example
, they can join the small classes which are associated with information technology
they
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 are planning to attend the IT institution.
Moreover
, they will have
time
 to read medical books and learn how
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doctors work in their field if they are interested in medicine. After that, they need to use the computer thoroughly when they become students
of
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university
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. If they take a gap year before entering
university
, they will have
time
 to learn about the
compurtes
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computers
 to be friendly with
it
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them
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. And
then
, it will support
to
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them because a student who can use
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a computer
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computer
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 well has many possibilities to obtain a scholarship.
Secondly
, they have more private
time
 to do their interests and spend
time
 with their family or friends. After finishing the matriculation exam, teenagers need to be relaxed because they were too exhausted to take the exam.
Furthermore
, they did not have a chance to do their hobbies in their state school. Spending
time
 with their family or friends before attending
university
 is one of the best ways to motivate them because there will be many problems to face if they are
university
 students.
Furthermore
, they are saving their energy during
this
 period to be an excellent
university
 student. In conclusion, more and more teenagers take a gap year before joining
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institution
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 nowadays. For the reasons that I mentioned above, I believe that the advantages of
this
 trend outweigh the disadvantages.
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