Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare

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is a big problem in modern society. Many people argue that the

quality

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of

healthcare

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is determined by the number of trained and recruited medical staff. I agree

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important but I personally believe that there are many other factors that play a vital role in

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problem. On the one hand, I agree that human resources are the key factor

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the health industry.

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, doctors and nurses are key players in the care and

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of patients. If there is a shortage of

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resource, the patient will not receive good care, leading to many risks.

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, during the recent covid-19 pandemic, the shortage of medical

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made

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difficult.

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, doctor and nurse's qualification is obviously a determining factor in the

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healthcare

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. Doctors study to improve their

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qualifications

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and access

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to modern techniques to treat difficult diseases in their country, limiting patients to go abroad.

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, I would like to emphasize the

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of

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and facilities in improving the

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of the health sector in a country. Before of all, the

government

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needs to pay more attention to hospitals as well as medical facilities, creating conditions for hospitals to develop. The

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should support more policies for medical staff to help them stabilize their life to devote

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the cause of

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.

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,

facilicies

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facilities

are the factors contributing to improving the

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of

treatment

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and care. For

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, currently, private hospitals invest in many modern machines to help doctors access

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diagnosis

and

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earlier and more effectively. In summary, I believe that training and recruiting more medical staff is a good solution to increase the

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of medical examination and

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.

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, I

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emphasize the importance of

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and infrastructure investment to help achieve the best

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of

healthcare

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.