A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team Summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts Say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to offer some valuable feedback on spending a certain amount of money on the children’s
sports
team or open-air
concerts
by a large company in my region.
To begin
with, I would like to suggest that there are many benefits of sponsoring the
sports
team in a local area.
Firstly
, it makes children participate easily in
sports
daily like playing badminton or basketball after they finish school.
Secondly
, the children can be healthier both mental and physical by playing
sports
near their area.
On the other hand
, by summarising the advantages of spending some budget on
concerts
in a community area,
concerts
such
as music or other kinds of
concerts
make the children to be happy and even can motivate them when they are getting depression. Because both have merits, in my opinion, an organization should spend the budget on both a local
sports
team and
concerts
by allocating money. I hope my insight will be valuable. Yours faithfully Sandar Myint
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sportsmanship
  • fosters
  • cultivates
  • talents
  • accessible
  • cultural entertainment
  • boosts
  • tourism
  • temporary employment opportunities
  • patron of the arts
  • community engagement
  • long-term impact
  • economic benefits
  • alternating support
  • maximize community impact
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