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In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#countries #adults #parents #education #jobs
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look for an independent space to live on their own. But in
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 countries, there is a staggering number of
people
 who still live with their
parents
. While
this
 trend might bring some certain benefits, I still believe that the drawbacks overweight the benefits. On the
onw
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on
 hand, living in
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 house with their own
parents
 could
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 expenses. While other adults have to pay many types of bills, it could be shared
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 everyone in a family. It
also
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 young adults to save money so they could invest
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 their own business. It
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 easier for everyone in the family to support and take care of each other. Living with their
parents
, youngsters could receive advice which will
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 for their future.
On the other hand
, living with
parents
 could cause some tremendous problems.
Firstly
, youngsters will be reliant on their
parents
. With the help of their
parents
, they may not have to do
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house chores
such
 as doing laundry or washing dishes.
This
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 for them if they have to move out and live alone. Living with their
parents
also
 make being less confident which may cause
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 in problem-solving or decision-making. Compare with
people
 who live alone, they might feel less confident. In conclusion,
although
 young
people
 can receive some financial and mental support from family members, I think it more advisable
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 them to live alone after graduating which will lead them to a life of independent lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cohabitation
  • intergenerational living
  • self-sufficiency
  • financial stability
  • maturation
  • dependency
  • socio-economic factors
  • familial dynamics
  • personal autonomy
  • housing affordability
  • cultural expectations
  • life trajectory
  • emotional resilience
  • nuclear family
  • joint family system
  • economic prudence
  • privacy concerns
  • social stigma
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