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In nations that have already gained greate wealth,any additional economic prosperity would not make people more satisfied.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,it seems that
wealth
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 is inextricably linked to some senses like happiness and contentment, but it is said that in
societies
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 that are rich and have a strong economy, no more
wealth
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 can promote public satisfaction.I partially agree with
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 idea.
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 of all,food,shelter, and clean water are vital to humans' needs to be content,so more
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 means more convenient access to them in general.
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,rich
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 are associated with high-quality educational systems.It means society provides
people
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 with an opportunity to receive well-rounded tertiary education without scrambling with high tuition.
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 leads to specialised
people
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 in different fields who can offer high-quality services to the public and promote general contentment.Apart from that,in
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 which stand at the top economically,more investment in developing and upgrading roads and public transit can be seen.The existence of safer roads will decrease road fatalities and engaging high-tech vehicles in the public transport sector help
people
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 to save their time and energy ,and make them more content.
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,it can be seen that the wealthiest
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 are not necessarily the most satisfied.
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,the USA as a wealthy county is not even near the poorer ones like Nigeria which is ranked 20th.In the majority of rich nations,
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 and facilities are not distributed evenly.It causes different social classes to be created and leads to a
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 gap in
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.In
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 ,conditions a huge amount of depression and stress is imposed on
people
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 and makes them dissatisfied when they see all good facilities belong to affluent classes.
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,consumerism is propagated in these regions and
people
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 start keeping up with others.
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 behaviour will keep
people
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 away from moral values and destroy
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 as the days go by. In summary,it is not easy for
people
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 to live in a region with a vulnerable economic climate,but it does not mean that the wealthiest
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 have the most satisfied
people
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.Individuals would be happy and content in
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 where facilities and
wealth
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 are distributed justly even if they are not the richest ones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic prosperity
  • Satisfaction
  • Hedonic treadmill
  • Materialism
  • Non-materialistic
  • Diminishing returns
  • Wealth distribution
  • Cultural values
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Social inequality
  • Psychological adaptation
  • Quality of life
  • Subjective well-being
  • Long-term fulfillment
  • Affluence
  • Consumerism
  • Mental health
  • Life satisfaction
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