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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? what are the benefits of travelling for travellers?

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The pie charts compare the proportions of
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 countries, while there are some specific characteristics in each country. It is clear that the percentage of middle
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 in these
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 countries. Singapore can see the highest proportion at
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, followed by Japan at 60% and Kenya at nearly 60%.
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elderly
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elderly
 people.
This
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proportion
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 is shown to be just 2% in Kenya, while over six times and fourteen times that figure can be seen in Singapore and Japan respectively. On the final point to note is considerable variations seen in the
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younger generations
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 aged 0-14. Kenya's share for
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 the figure of Singapore and Japan, at 12%.
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