In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In terms of advertisement, enterprises strongly suggest that their goods are novel in some way

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these days.

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is because they try to defeat other

companies'

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companies

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products

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this

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influences the market negatively because of excessive

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advertising

adverdising

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advertising

including incorrect information and hard

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for customers. At

first

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, if all businesses emphasise that they are producing

newest

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the newest

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things, they may tell lies about their

products

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, a

japanese

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snack company

selll

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sell

sells

chocolates which are written as healthy snacks. Though their advertisements say that their

products

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are totally healthy, they contain some amount of sugar.

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, customers think the company are telling a lie.

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, customers have difficulties

to find

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what they really want because there are millions of

products

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which are the best

choices

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based on the advertisements. In the modern world, crowds

try

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to find the best

products

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from a lot of

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. Before buying, they tend to search

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Youtube or Instagram or other SNS. If all advertisements put on these SNS

empasise

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emphasise

emphasised

that their goods are new,

peolpe

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people

are in trouble for purchasing.

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, companies which sell electric devices,

such

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as smartphones and tablets. As it is clear, all devices contain remarkable characteristics. In that situation, citizens have no idea which one is the best choice even if businesses try to advertise their

products

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as updated things. In conclusion,

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recent

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in recnet

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recnet

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recent

years, businesses often make people understand that their goods include new characteristics in some way.

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trend doesn't have positive influences because

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they

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they

have

possibility

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the possibility

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of advertising incorrect information and

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a few

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ways to find the best

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Your opinion

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do advantage of this development outweigh this disadvantages.