In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In terms of advertisement, enterprises strongly suggest that their goods are novel in some way
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these days.
This
is because they try to defeat other
companies'
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products
.
However
,
this
influences the market negatively because of excessive
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advertising
adverdising
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advertising
including incorrect information and hard
choices
for customers. At
first
, if all businesses emphasise that they are producing
newest
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things, they may tell lies about their
products
.
For instance
, a
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snack company
selll
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sell
sells
chocolates which are written as healthy snacks. Though their advertisements say that their
products
are totally healthy, they contain some amount of sugar.
Thus
, customers think the company are telling a lie.
Moreover
, customers have difficulties
to find
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what they really want because there are millions of
products
which are the best
choices
based on the advertisements. In the modern world, crowds
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to find the best
products
from a lot of
choices
. Before buying, they tend to search
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Youtube or Instagram or other SNS. If all advertisements put on these SNS
empasise
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emphasise
emphasised
that their goods are new,
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people
are in trouble for purchasing.
For example
, companies which sell electric devices,
such
as smartphones and tablets. As it is clear, all devices contain remarkable characteristics. In that situation, citizens have no idea which one is the best choice even if businesses try to advertise their
products
as updated things. In conclusion,
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recnet
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recent
years, businesses often make people understand that their goods include new characteristics in some way.
On the other hand
,
this
trend doesn't have positive influences because
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they
thye
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they
have
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of advertising incorrect information and
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ways to find the best
choices
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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