Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays
students
are usually given
homework
in their schools. Some
group
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of people suppose that teachers should not give
homework
for
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school children, while
another
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others
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argue
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that it is necessary to give
such
work
for
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to
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students
. Now I am going to discuss both points of view and give my own opinion. There
are
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no doubt that
practicing
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makes perfect.
Homework
is helping children to understand
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the topic
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topic
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better. They can spend a lot of
time
studying and developing themselves.
For
instance
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when I was younger I used to do
homework
everyday
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. Some exercises that I could not do
by
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my own I did with my parents.
This
process helped me to absorb information better and get good marks.
Moreover
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homework
take
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a huge part of their free
time
, so they do not get bored and do not do bad things like smoking etc.
On the other
hand
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homework
is not so necessary.
Students
can relax in
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spared
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time
rather than doing their tests or practice. They can do extracurricular activities like playing chess, reading
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a book
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book
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books
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or
be
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a volunteer.
This
will develop them as a person.
Moreover
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they can join
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the sport
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sport
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team
of
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their schools and become a professional player that will make
theirs
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body
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bodies
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healthier. They
also
will make new teammate friends. In conclusion, I think that teachers should not give
homework
to their
students
. It will be better
to
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them.
This
development will make
students
more versatile and friendly. School children will spend more
time
with
theirs
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lovely family and loyal friends.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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