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Violence in the society is largely promoted by violence shown in media. To what extent do you agree?

#violence #society #media
In the contemporary era,
media
 is playing an important role in influencing
the
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society with the shows they broadcast and on multiple occasions, it is often recognized as a medium of spreading violence across the nation. As a part of the same society, I strongly agree with
this
 notion because social
media
 in the current environment is not a source of entertainment anymore, but become a medium to influence the countrymen.
Also
, one more reason behind
this
 happening
,
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 is a common trend among news
media
 houses, who modify the video content and fake it with false
report
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 to attract a specific
group
 of people. It goes without saying, the visuals promoted on various social
media
 platforms encourage a section of adults to follow the same trend and replicate the act in their surroundings. A classic example to give
this
 sentence some highlight is the recent incident
happened
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 in the country's capital, where a
group
 of adults burned a section of
temple
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 to challenge the other community members in the residential area. The incident was recorded and promoted on social
media
 platforms, which
as a result
 hurt the sentiments of a
group
 of society and ended when they did the same to take
the
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revenge.
Furthermore
, modification of content to gain audience interest is not a new practice in use by the News channels. Every telecast
group
 is on the run to increase their viewers and can do whatever is possible to achieve
this
 goal.
For example
, a
non violent
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 video can be tempered by editing clips of it using new technology and can be represented as a violent one, to boost the
channel
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followings
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. To conclude, the telecasts on tv shows and posts on social
media
 platforms does impact largely the actions of public viewers and should be monitored closely to stop its aftereffects.
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