You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

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Dear Mr Black and Mr Hawkins, I am writing
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letter to inform you that I have to discontinue your evening
class
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"Introduction to Business Analysis". I enjoyed the lectures from you about all the background theories of business analysis, tools and techniques of data analysis and visualization. Unfortunately, in an unfavourable situation, I will not be able to join your classes anymore. Early
this
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month, the new management team of my company introduced a shift system to all the employees. They have been thinking of deploying
this
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system since the early months of the Covid-19 pandemic.
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it will not extend the business hours of each employee, we are going to have randomized working hours every weekday. So, I will no longer be able to confirm that I will be available during
class
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times.
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I am no longer able to continue the
class
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at the moment, I do not want you to refund my tuition fees.
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, I would like to join a similar
class
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on weekends in the upcoming batch. Despite I have learnt 15% of your lectures, I am more than happy to start over from the beginning.
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, I am sorry for all these unnecessary arrangements, I hope you will give my request some consideration and I am sure I will learn at my best if I get a chance to shift to the upcoming weekend
class
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. Sincerely, Zay Yar Myint.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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