Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, howerver , say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that exercising infrastructures should be built to prompt public health, while others think that those

facilities

can be replaced by other methods. In my opinion, governments should take several steps to deal with

this

problem. It is true that

residents

hold the view that with more

sports

facilities

, people could exercise regularly and improve their healthy states. If a large number of

sports

areas can be built, that would offer

residents

places to both strengthen their bodies and refresh their minds.Without those

facilities

, people in their spare time

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stay at home more to go after other alternative recreations ,

such

as computer games, which are popular with teenagers and would not only do harm to their eyesight

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but

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lead to obesity. I agree that alternative measures can be applied to care

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public health. On the one hand, junk food and fast food should be restricted by governments through healthy advertisements on

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social media, which could improve the health awareness of the public.

On the other hand

, encouraging transmits whose living apartments are not far from the companies to walk to work is a good way for those

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not have extra time for doing

sports

and nowadays, it is normal for many companies and organizations

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a new system which

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employees to do regular exercise not only encourage them to be enthusiastic

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but

also

help them to built healthy bodies. Without those measures, it is hard for

residents

to keep a healthy state.And building modern hospitals with special

health-care

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facilities

should be built not only in central cities but

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also

aslo

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in the suburbs of states by organizations. In conclusion,

sports

facilities

can provide

residents

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place to exercise,

however

, governments should take more steps to achieve

this

goal.