Some people believe that to reduce industrial pollution a tax should be imposed on companies, while others believe that different measures should be taken to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, our mother earth is really in danger due to
pollution
. There is an argument that imposing a tax on industrial
factories
is the best way to eliminate it. In my opinion,
this
is not the case. In
this
essay, the drawbacks of
this
will be mentioned and the other solutions will be discussed.
Firstly
,
factories
that produce
plastic
bags, bottles, and
plastic
packaging emit exhaust fumes into the atmosphere.
This
is the reason why they are suggesting adding the tax to those
factories
. Unfortunately, implementing tax means adding costs to the manufacturer.
Instead
of helping them to contribute success to our society, they are pushing them into bankruptcy. Proper awareness about the drawbacks of
this
pollution
and limiting the use of plastics are the best effective way.
For example
, supermarkets are not allowed to issue
plastic
bags to their customer. They will
then
need to use eco-bag when going shopping or else they will bring their groceries with their bare hands.
As a result
, the production will be reduced and the
factories
will change them to eco-bags, which are produced from natural products.
Moreover
, awareness of the possible negative impact of
pollution
needs to be posted and published on social media.
Furthermore
, the government can conduct a public campaign. On
this
, they will be aware and understand the importance of reducing using of
plastic
and its benefit of it to our environment. In conclusion, I would like to say that, people appear is the main reason for environmental problems. Lack of awareness about the causes of these problems increases the risk of
further
Earth life. Understanding the consequences of the mentioned
pollution
and limiting the use of
plastic
are the key solutions.
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