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How buildings have changed in comparison in the past

Over the past many
years
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, there have been huge changes in how buildings are designed and built, from the introduction of indoor plumbing to luxurious extravagances like glass windows. There has
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 been a huge change in the
construction
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 industry as a whole, which has affected housing for everyone.
Firstly
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, one of the main changes in
construction
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 is the notion of “going green.” Fewer plastics are used during
construction
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 and most materials are locally sourced now.
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, it helps cut down
cost
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,
emissions
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and emissions
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 and even extend the life of the home or other building.
Secondly
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, many new architects look to show movement within the
construction
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 of the building itself. Many buildings are no longer traditional rectangles built on top of one another with partitions to include walls and rooms.
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, many designers look
towards
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 more natural, organic items in life and construct the building
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.
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, allowing natural light in helps cut energy costs from relying on
light
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the light
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. As building materials have become stronger in recent
years
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, traditional architecture is now allowing the usage of more windows.
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,
instead
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 of a single window letting in a small amount of light, a wall can be nearly completely constructed from windows, if someone is looking for
this
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 kind of look. In conclusion, the buildings of today display that modern architecture is on the rise. So, the past many
years
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has
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 seen a lot of change in the housing industry and it’ll be interesting to see what the future holds for
construction
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 in the
years
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 to come.

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