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Advantage and disadvantages of traveling by airplane?

#advantage #airplane
There is various way to travel from
one
 place to another. The
airplane
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 is
one
 the most important transportation vehicle nowadays. They are fast and comfortable.
However
, they have some disadvantages too. They are too much expensive and airports are too crowded. In
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 I explain both. There are many advantages of travelling by
airplane
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.
First
,
airplanes
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 are very fast. They use jet engines and they can have a speed of about 900 km per hour. They travel the shortest distance to the destination in the sky. So, they are the faster vehicle.
Second
, they are comfortable. Airlines are trying to attract more passengers.
Hence
, they make more comfortable seats and cabins for
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. As we know, there are more
airplanes
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 with VIP seats.
For example
,
airbus
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 A380is like a hotel and has a bar, dance salon and so forth.
Thus
, there are a lot of advantages of travelling by airline, there are some disadvantages too.
Airplanes
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 are having a lot of delays at airports. They need too much time for their
next
 flight. So, the passenger has to with for a long time at airports.
For example
, at Tehran national airport, passengers have to stay for 2 hours. It is
one
 of the downsides of
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. The
next
one
 is that they are too much expensive.
Airplanes
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 need service for each flight, as well as they, need
engine
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 server for a period fly.
Theis
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 services need expensive materials and special engineers.
As a result
, passengers have to pay a lot of money for short-distance and long-distance fly. In summary,
although
airplanes
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 have benefits, they have disadvantages too. they are fastening vehicles and they are comfortable too. But they need a long time to be ready to
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 and they are too much expensive.
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