You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents, In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your advertisement in ABC magazine about a job taking care of a six-year-old kid.
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, I think I am suitable for
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work. I would like to explain more. I am planning for a one-year visit to Australia, and
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would be a great chance for me after finishing my studies in psychology. In recent months, I had the chance to work with many kids and helped them to improve their social skills.
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, I love to talk and work with youngsters, and it helps me to patiently spend more time with kids.
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, I believe I would be a suitable choice to live with you for a six-month duration to look after your young kid. During my visit, and in my spare time, I would rather visit natural sceneries in Australia.
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, I prefer to spend time reading books about children's psychology and preparing myself for a graduate degree entrance exam.
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, I hope that I will have the chance to get the job. Truly yours, Amirali
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
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