You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents, In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your advertisement in ABC magazine about a job taking care of a six-year-old kid.

Accordingly

, I think I am suitable for

this

work. I would like to explain more. I am planning for a one-year visit to Australia, and

this

would be a great chance for me after finishing my studies in psychology. In recent months, I had the chance to work with many kids and helped them to improve their social skills.

Therefore

, I love to talk and work with youngsters, and it helps me to patiently spend more time with kids.

As a result

, I believe I would be a suitable choice to live with you for a six-month duration to look after your young kid. During my visit, and in my spare time, I would rather visit natural sceneries in Australia.

Also

, I prefer to spend time reading books about children's psychology and preparing myself for a graduate degree entrance exam.

Consequently

, I hope that I will have the chance to get the job. Truly yours, Amirali

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

180 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

nowadays, most countries can improve the standard of living through economic development, but some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

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