Some people move to other countries when they retire. Others think that it is better to retire in their home country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
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and even settle there. They argue that they have seen everything in their own nation and would like to spend the rest of their lives living abroad. Use synonyms
For example
, an Asian businessman shifts to Europe after he retires to enjoy new travelling and trekking experiences. Linking Words
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want to see new monuments and visit new places that they have not seen where they lived for more than half of their lives so they move to a new land. Use synonyms
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prefer to move to other countries when they retire.
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On the other hand
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believe that it is much better to spend their post-work life in their motherland. They argue that they have been so caught up with work and now want to give more Use synonyms
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to their dear ones. For an instance, an army or a policeman who spends most of his life away from home would like to donate all his remaining Use synonyms
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, if he settles abroad on his own, he will not be able to do so. Linking Words
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even after retirement.
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