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Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films and songs) in anyway they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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 discussion around the world that artistic
freedom
 should be restricted or not, even in some democratic countries. I agree with the idea of no
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 because I believe that society’s best
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 are served when there is no limitation in artistic fields.
Freedom
 of artistic expression is important in its own right.
Such
freedom
 gives the widest scope to the exchange of ideas in
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society and
also
 promotes the general level of culture. There is a reason describing that
freedom
 is essential as it is closely
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 to particular politics. If a government passes laws restricting artistic expressions on political speech without
freedom
 of speech, the development of a democratic society would be greatly curtailed. Most
of
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the developed countries are not restricting the
freedom
 of artists while some which restrict are dropped behind the world. Most advocates of limiting artistic
freedom
 will say that they are not only for restrictions in certain cases.
For example
, in political content, or even perhaps religious content which is contrary to the majority religion of a country.
However
, in the
first
 case, suppression of political expression is very often a question of tightening legitimate criticism of corruption or abuse of power by the government.
Secondly
, outlawing minority religious views only creates greater tension and potential for conflict in society. In conclusion, creative
freedom
 is an ideal worth defending. It makes possible the developments of culture, and it is
also
 inherently linked to broader freedoms.
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