Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
There has been a phenomenon that travelling has been popular nowadays. There are some reasons behind it, and there are some benefits for the travellers.
First
, is the development of global transportation. As we know, due to poor transportation, most people could only stay in the same place lifelong in the past. Linking Words
However
, due to the advent of modern transportations, Linking Words
such
as planes and trains, people can reach their destinations in a short time period. Linking Words
Therefore
, the number of travellers has increased dramatically; everyone wants to visit their dream tourist destinations. It's worth mentioning that the prevalence of tourism can Linking Words
also
propel the unification of the world. Thanks to developed transportation, we can go wherever we want and come into contact with the local culture. Linking Words
As a result
, we can make friends and understand each other more.
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Second
, is the popularity of social media. Take me as an example. I have seen some unknown islands' ads several times; they all propagate the advantages of those islands and tend to attract more visitors. In the past, there were not many ways where people could get in touch with the outside words; Linking Words
nevertheless
, the advent of social media has evolved into one of the biggest contributors to tourism. In Linking Words
this
case, commercials can fascinate viewers unwittingly and achieve their goals Linking Words
finally
.
There are countless benefits of travelling for the travellers. Linking Words
For example
, experiencing exotic cultures, Linking Words
such
as languages and living habits. I had never been to the EU before I moved to Germany Linking Words
last
year. Because of those valuable travelling experiences, I have some background knowledge of different European countries.
In conclusion, there are two reasons and some benefits.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...