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Write a letter to refer a friend for job in your company

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Dear Sir, I am writing to formally recommend my friend for the position of “Research Handler in Physiology of Animals” with your esteemed organization. It has been my privilege to work with “Zudio Research Group” for
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 10 years. Recently, my classmate from University applied for
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 job in your reputed company and he holds around 5 years of work experience in the field of advanced exploration of wildlife species. During the Master’s in Zoology, he invented new categories of Ants in Kerala, India and he got various savages for his accomplishment from the faculty and Government of India in the year 2020.
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 Board of Education
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 his findings as
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 book of knowledge for Zoologists.
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 lab equipment like microscopes, preserving permanent slides and many more that are useful for doing the job. I kindly request a reference for securing his employment in the vacancy. I would really appreciate
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 you gave him a chance
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contribution
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 your corporation as he has all the desired skills that are mandatory requirements of
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 position offered by the Enterprise. I look forward
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 your positive response. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sarao
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples of tasks or projects your friend has accomplished that align with the job description.
coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking down long paragraphs for clarity and better presentation.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is professional and suitable for a job recommendation, with a clear intent to recommend the friend for the position.
coherence and cohesion
The letter includes a warm and appropriate greeting and closing.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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