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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? Whay measures can you suggest to make it easier

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Evolution gave us the main way of survival, that adaptability .
Nevertheless
, it is not the same harsh rule to alter or die as the ancient law of nature. Whereas, we still struggle with the eternal
changes
 in
society
.
Firstly
, it became harder to face altering our everyday routine because humans tend to feel more conservative. Our century is not considered an era of wars, or global migrations, that result in being addicted to an actual benevolent way of living.
For example
, it is very annoying for most citizens of
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first world
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 countries to get rid of their amenities and they consider it a catastrophe. Despite
this
 fact, the main incentive for us to be open to
changes
 is understanding that most shifts
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modern
society
 are progressive and they lead to better implementation of technologies.
However
,
a
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competitiveness is a phenomenon
that is
 really frightening, it implements an idea of a better result for a lower price.
On the other hand
, we can expatiate over some unpredictable
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 even disastrous
changes
.
Furthermore
, we need measures to prevent
such
changes
, that
are
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 given by a state. The knowledge of social awareness is crucial for everyone.
Hence
,
society
 is sure that they are safe from dire straights. In conclusion, I reckon that
society
 should divide all
changes
 into dangerous and positive ones. We need to be aware of the
first
 category and we should have an agile mindset to understand the inevitableness of the
second
 one.
Moreover
, the assurance of safety given by a state will make us feel that some
changes
 are vital.
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