You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint.. In your letter, you should tell: Say why you are writing and how you feel Explain what happened Tell them what you would like them to do.

The given line graph illustrates the
number
of grocery closures and openings in a country over a 7-year period. Overall, it is clear that
although
there were some big fluctuations in both opening and closing figures, the final
number
for both of them was lower than the starting point. In 2011, the
figure
for opening and closure stood at about 8500 and 6400 respectively. By the
next
year, the opening
figure
had dropped sharply by 4500
,
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but
then
increased gradually to just over 6000 in 2014. At the same time, the
number
of stores that closed fluctuated several times and
finally
reached the same point as opening in 2014. In 2015, regarding the opening
figure
, it decreased significantly to exactly 4000 and remained stable over the following two years.
This
number
for closure had witnessed a sharp fall to approximately 500 by 2015.
However
, it rose dramatically to just above 5000. it remains relatively unchanged for the rest of the period, despite a negligible fluctuation. By 2018, the opening
figure
had reduced by 1000.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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