You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Ramesh, It was a while since we talked, hope your trip to Germany was great.

This

year, my country Jordan was nominated to host the "Art and Music" festival, which will fall in June. I know that

this

month will be the end of your term at university and I was wondering if you can arrange your

trip to attend

this

festival.

This

festival will be different from the one that you visited

last

year in Spain

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since it will host different artists and signers,

for instance

, Amr Diab will have two continuous shows, Andy Fred will do a magic show and much more activities which I am sure you will be interested to see.

In addition

this

, I will be joining a traditional artist for the

first

time and doing multiple shows and it will be great to see you there and support me . I am so excited to hear back from you and let me know that you will attend the festival. Yours Rami

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The Closing

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Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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8 paragraphs

170 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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