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Not enough students choose science subjects in universities in many countries. What are the reasons and what are the impacts on our society

#students #science #subjects #universities #countries #impacts #society
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Nowadays,
science
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 is no longer a popular option for many
students
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 in many countries.
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 essay will discuss the main reasons and will
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 explain how it would adversely impact society. The reduction in demand for
science
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 as tertiary education is mainly due to the fact that people are choosing other
courses
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 which have better career prosperity. Indeed, in
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 materialistic world, people are more interested in learning subjects which would promise them better employment opportunities. In India,
courses
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 as computer engineering are in high demand as
students
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 are getting
jobs
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 as soon as they complete while compared to
students
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 who learned other subjects. Those
students
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 who are professionally qualified in
science
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 are changing their career to I.T, even though there are few
science
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-related
jobs
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 available as the pay is much lower for these
jobs
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. More and more
students
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,
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, are unwilling to opt for
science
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 in order to avoid these dire repercussions. Fewer admissions for
science
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-related
courses
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,
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, is a serious issue in many societies mainly due to the fact that many universities would discontinue providing these
courses
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 to the public. The objective of many universities is to generate profit in order to grow, so if a department is not performing well,
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 the management would consider shutting that down. Many staffs in that department would lose their
jobs
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 as a consequence of
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 initiative taken. These staff might find it difficult to find alternate
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,
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 they are qualified due to the same reason. In
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this
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 would not only impacts the career of these staff but
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 would affect their family because of unemployment. In conclusion, in my perspective, the drop in preference for
science
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 subjects is mainly because of the lack of appealing employment options in
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 field, and
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 has negatively impacted the lives of many
science
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-qualified professionals and their families.
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