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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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In the contemporary world, due to rapid societal changes there is a proliferation in people are moving or migrating among countries to look for better opportunities in either living or working.
However
, there are arguments about living in a country where we ought to speak foreign
language
 can bring significant social and practical problems.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate my views on agreeing the negative impacts of the statement and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
 and foremost reason behind
this
 is that learning new
language
 will never be easy.
Therefore
,
language
 barriers and misunderstanding can cause a myriad of negative practical issues when people cannot communicate, understand well or express their own feelings.
For example
: signing an agreement in a foreign
language
, where you are unable to fully understand all the terms and conditions stated in the contract can bring an array of dire consequences. Probing ahead, when individuals are not be able to speak in the
language
, it is harder to blend into the community as well as weaken the ability in socializing.
For instance
:
language
 obstacles are affecting your social life, you will have no friend to share with or talk to and live in a dull lifestyle. Apart from the reasons mentioned above, the occurrence of health issues are possible as you cannot clearly explain to the doctor about your sickness. To sum up, according to the reasons aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that speaking in foreign
language
 can give birth to deleterious impacts in many ways.
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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