Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I saw the advert you posted on the bulletin board regarding that job you offer

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summer. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I'

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interested and I can start the

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day of the summer. My name is Ben and my house is just two blocks away from yours. Unfortunately, I'

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no good at cooking and laundry,

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, you can leave the heavy and tiring work to me. I'

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good at repairing broken things, like chairs, doors, windows, etc. If you have something that needs fixing, you can count on me, as long as it's not an electrical problem. I'

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applying for a scholarship program abroad and I have to take an exam to be eligible.

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summer, I decided that I'll devote myself to my studies so I can pass that test. Even so, I need a breather from time to time in order for me not to get bored. I can

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earn money while helping you on that job,

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, it is an advantage for me. I can go to your house after lunch

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because I have chores in the morning. I

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have to be back by 6:30pm since I have to study for my exam. I'

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looking forward to your reply at your soonest. Yours sincerely, Ben Sy

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

221 words

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