In many countries, truancy is worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

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of factors to join more
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, their curriculum is very
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subjects in a short time, which may be frustrating for
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relationship between parents with their
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  • truancy
  • peer pressure
  • bullying
  • engagement
  • curriculum
  • domestic violence
  • mental health issues
  • socioeconomic factors
  • poverty
  • academic underachievement
  • employment prospects
  • criminal activities
  • community safety
  • social cohesion
  • school funding
  • attendance rates
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