Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

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is different and some people like eating the vegetables and the
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half like to eat
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, but when anyone eats a
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of
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will with him a
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of diseases and in
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said about meet and
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what we will talk about. The
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thing in
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is a good thing the health side the
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is own many of vitamins and something the human needs it and can`t live without it
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meaning if don`t you don`t eat
meat
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your body is weak and needs lots of protein , so you should eat
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. The
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thing is the
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when eating a
lot
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of
meat
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not good for health and will be many diseases and will be fat to improve the health we should to eat the healthy thing like vegetables and some
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burn fat because when you eating a
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you will be fat,
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if you git diseases you should start in the feeding system. In the
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end I agree with
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topic you can eat
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, and bat in limited quantities and
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that
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don`t
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doesn`t
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mean you should eat
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good things and
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with benefits.
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