Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

The

food

is different and some people like eating the vegetables and the

next

half like to eat

food

, but when anyone eats a

lot

of

food

will with him a

lot

of diseases and in

this

year the Palestinian government found 1 million

person

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said about meet and

this

what we will talk about. The

first

thing in

meat

is a good thing the health side the

food

is own many of vitamins and something the human needs it and can`t live without it

this

meaning if don`t you don`t eat

meat

your body is weak and needs lots of protein , so you should eat

meat

. The

second

thing is the

meat

when eating a

lot

of

meat

not good for health and will be many diseases and will be fat to improve the health we should to eat the healthy thing like vegetables and some

food

burn fat because when you eating a

lot

you will be fat,

furthermore

if you git diseases you should start in the feeding system. In the

,

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end I agree with

this

topic you can eat

meat

, and bat in limited quantities and

when

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that

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don`t

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doesn`t

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mean you should eat

a

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good things and

food

with benefits.