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Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful to their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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 and children will spend all
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playing games or other programs and it is inevitable that their communication with their friends will
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 to prepare them for school tasks . To summarize , parents and teachers must observe girls and boys carefully to
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health problematic in related to automation ,alongside,children can
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