In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies Do you think the advantages out weigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, In many
nation
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plastic
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products
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easily
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available
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then
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other
products
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as glass . Many industries and companies are using
plastic
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by
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food packaging and
plastic
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bottles for drinking.
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there are few benefits. I
porsonally
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personally
believe that the disadvantages are much stronger. Certainly, there are
few
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advantages of using
plastic
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products
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. It is easily available in many shops and
mall
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raither
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rather
than other
products
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.
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, it is normally manufactured in large quality
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then
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glass and
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to
over all
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cost of materials low .
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,
human
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are used
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because.it is cheaper than glass and easily carry any
places
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because it is
unbrekable
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unbreakable
.
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, there are numerous disadvantages
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using
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containers. The predominant one is that, in
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era people
in
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the all over world
using
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plastic
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containers and
then
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throwing
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on the open ground. To elaborate, people are using
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many per pose
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as
plastic
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water bottles,
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plastic
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food containers and
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through it on the road
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using
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of using
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beans
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bad habit
harmful
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animals
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life .
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animals die each year after
ingation
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ingestion
plastic
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. Another drawback worth mentioning of more used
plastic
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products
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is
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health related
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issues. Explaining in simple terms, in many companies
employer
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are manufacturing
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products
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as toys . Companies produce lots of fumes
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is harmful peoples and
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very effective children life .
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, youngsters and children inhale fumes they
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from
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disease
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diseases
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as asthma,cancers, impaired immunity and so on .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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