In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies Do you think the advantages out weigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, In many
nation
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plastic
products
easily
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available
then
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other
products
such
as glass . Many industries and companies are using
plastic
by
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food packaging and
plastic
bottles for drinking.
Although
there are few benefits. I
porsonally
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personally
believe that the disadvantages are much stronger. Certainly, there are
few
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advantages of using
plastic
products
. It is easily available in many shops and
mall
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raither
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rather
than other
products
.
In other words
, it is normally manufactured in large quality
then
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glass and
help
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to
over all
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cost of materials low .
For example
,
human
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humans
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are used
plastic
because.it is cheaper than glass and easily carry any
places
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place
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because it is
unbrekable
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unbreakable
.
On the other hand
, there are numerous disadvantages
of
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using
plastic
containers. The predominant one is that, in
this
era people
in
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the all over world
using
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plastic
containers and
then
throwing
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on the open ground. To elaborate, people are using
plastic
many per pose
such
as
plastic
water bottles,
plastic
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and plastic
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food containers and
then
through it on the road
instead
using
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beans
this
bad habit
harmful
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animals
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life .
For
example
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animals die each year after
ingation
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ingestion
plastic
. Another drawback worth mentioning of more used
plastic
products
is
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health related
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issues. Explaining in simple terms, in many companies
employer
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employers
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are manufacturing
plastic
products
such
as toys . Companies produce lots of fumes
this
is harmful peoples and
also
very effective children life .
As a result
, youngsters and children inhale fumes they
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from
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a disease
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disease
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diseases
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such
as asthma,cancers, impaired immunity and so on .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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